Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, November 20, 2020
My ecosystem🌴
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Hello Erina Lily-piper here
ReplyDeleteI love Your colours and all the information It makes me want to read more.
This reminds me of my ecosystem slideshow (it is not done yet tho:)
There is barley anything that you can do better Maybe a popping title like energising Ecosystem? But everything else is perfect.
Keep it up👍🤩
-Lily-Piper
Kia ora Erina, I really liked reading about ecosystems on this blog post. I really like learning and reading about the environment! Next time you could add some pictures of the Savanna ecosystem, so we can see what it looks like and not having to paint a picture in our head. Other than that this blog post is amazing! Did you enjoy learning about the different ecosystems? Have a good week!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI did really like learning about the different types of ecosystems and next time i will get a pic of them thanks for the feed back!
Bye